| Drunk Author: |
bonehead |
| Description: |
fuck....fucking mornings |
| When: |
11/20/2004 3:45:55 PM |
| What: |
fuck....fucking mornings |
| Why: |
Well, clearly this poet hates those mornings we do, that remind us of what we«ve done and what were going to do. |
| de comment: |
interesting. Don««t know if the poet was drunk or sticking to the theme. Guess he««s sharp enough to pull off faking it if he wasn««t. Its a pretty damn good poem. Why? because of this one god damn mother of a line: «"The only reason for mornings is to keep night and evening from bumping into each other«" nice. the rest of the poem is well executed but lacking the specific risks and pain that will be there when he gets to a bar, alone, down, and but fucking drunk. This poets talent plus DRUNK will equal brilliance I expect. |
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Fucking mornings
it was good last night
pretty good early this morning
i was a god on the dance floor
fucking bouncer
i wasn««t fuckin with him
my fuckin head
gotta piss
what the fuck did i step in
who puked
who is that
did i bring her home
i««m already hard
one more time won««t hurt
damn her pussy stinks
maybe i better just fuck her
god i have to pee
The only reason for mornings is to keep night and evening from bumping into each other
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| Author, bonehead |
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