Drunk Author: salacious muse
Description: Remembering the peak of a long-term relationship
When: 11/8/2004 11:17:32 AM
What: Remembering the peak of a long-term relationship
Why: such moments of refined random bliss must not go un-poetisized
de comment: Nice one. The heart is there - powerfull emotion, language intelligent. For next one, it would be nice to see it a little less clever and rhymy, and a tad more brave and risk taking. There must have been some kind of fear in there - perhaps burried worries relating to this feeling ending.. or perhaps, knowing this was the best things will ever get, your deep hearts parts whispered "it«s not good enough." Awesome poem. Please give us more. DE
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flamed atmosphere entire
Unique in savor was my previous night,
My passions never kissed such fiery height.

A fairy blinked and captured my senses,
We smoothly crossed all forbidden fences.

Her body’s essence flamed the entire air,
Burning I was in her glowing glare.

Spark with spark, fire with fire,
Boiling emotions flamed atmosphere entire.

Drowning we were for ecstasy’s survival,
Staggering I’m with those moments’ revival.

Morn though made that night past,
The glee it bestowed ’ll ever last.

It’ll electrify my feelings every night,
A dream has turned my instants so bright.
~~p.psyabsinthe, salaciousmuse

Author, salacious muse







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